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1 Review Requests on Sun Jun 02, 2013 8:36 pm

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Here are the current requests from before 06.19.2013 (before i take my temporary hiatus lol) sorted by individual. Please feel free to trade requests and ask one another for help. c:

If you do trade requests, or if you feel like you're not sorted for one that you've been assigned, please talk to biiancaz


biiancaz 1:
The Basics


Author:Co-Author:
ameliaish  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you like to complete your request?Are you willing to have someone else complete your request if it means that it will be done faster?What kind of review would you prefer?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/239107  --- Yes Harsh, Highly Analytical 
About Your Story...

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?
Silence Is Not Always Golden http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/355302/silence-is-not-always-golden-angst-fxband-krystal-kai-baekhyun-kaistal-baekstal Complete 
Current chapter count?Is your story rated?How would you describe the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?
No Angst  
What characters are included in your story?Story Description:
Krystal, Kai and Baekhyun.  Jongin realizes that he will no longer have the chance to make things right.

He learns a painful lesson - we only treasure what we've lost. 
A personal message to your reviewer?Anything else?
It would be nice if you could give me advice on how to arrange my stories better? As in improving the flow? Thanks! Krystal 



biiancaz 2:
idk, your queue literally says "hellobabyyoucalled" OTL. I think I sent this to you before, and the user changed their original username. So I can't put it here. OTL.



contradictori 1:
The Basics


AuthorCo-Author:
KatyMikayla  
Author Profile LinkCo-Author Profile Link:Who would you like to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/152112  Whoever's Free! 
About Your Story...

Story Title:Story LinkComplete or Incomplete?
Slave: Betrayal http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/272635/slave-betrayal-super-junior-version-angst-donghae-eunhae-eunhyuk-jessica-romance-sungmin Incomplete 
Current Chapter CountIs your story rated?Does your story include any of the following?How would you describe the genre of your story?
13 so far No - Smut
- Yaoi
 
Romance/Angst 
Please include a brief description of your story.What characters are included in your story?
: Imagine meeting someone, and immediately finding a connection with him.
Imagine being about to be with him forever, because he belongs to you.
Imagine spending years with that person, and
finally giving him everything that means anything you to because you trust him.
And now imagine finding out that he cheated on you.
Imagine the pain that you have to go through,
when you find out that you're pregnant with his child...
 
Jessica Jung, Lee Sungmin, Lee Hyukjae (Eunhyuk), Lee Donghae, and the rest of the SM family 
Anything else you'd like to add?  
Saranghae, Wishful Thoughts~!


AND THANK YOU! Very Happy



contradictori 2:
`basics


AuthorCo-Author:
shawolistic  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you prefer to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/146795  contradictori 
`your story

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?Current Chapter Count:Is your story rated?What is the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?Who are the main characters of your story?Story Description:
Saturation http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/463920/saturation-yaoi-alternateuniverse-lay-kris-suho-kray-fanxing Complete Nope. alternate universe, contest entry - Yaoi
 
Kris and Zhang Yixing It was that one night and then several nights over when Yixing kept on searching for that iridescent spectrum of light.  



contradictori 3:
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AuthorCo-Author:
onkeyjongmintae ShineeKEYlovesME 
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you prefer to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/43352 http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/42458 contradictori 
`your story

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?Current Chapter Count:Is your story rated?What is the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?Who are the main characters of your story?Story Description:
You Saw Me! http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/470471/you-saw-me-crackfic-oneshot-onew-shinee-you-drabble Complete Nope. idek. romance? angst? crackfic drabble whatever  Onew and you You are not really skinny and pretty (by society's standards anyway). You're meeting the person you like for the first time. (read the story to know how that is possible haehaoahe) You both wear masks to hide your faces during your first meeting. Looks don't matter, they say. So you remove your mask and show him your true face. What happens now? 
`don't let this summer end.
Additional Information for your Reviewer/Personal Message  

I love you. Please criticize me. CRITICISM IS GOOD. xoxo



tipkai 1:
The Basics


Author:Co-Author:
ChOlEy1454  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you like to complete your request?What kind of review would you prefer?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/12044  Whoever's Free! Uh. Whatever works best for my reviewer! 
About Your Story...

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?
Going Crazy http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/50022 Complete 
Current chapter count?Is your story rated?How would you describe the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?
73 Yes, for mature language angst/mystery - Smut
 
What characters are included in your story?Story Description:
Taecyeon and Wooyoung + all of 2PM,
Nicole, Yuri, Junhyung + all of Beast, and little appearances of girl group members 
Ok Taecyeon is the kingka of South High. With his dashing looks, charismatic attitude, and killer smiles, it's not wonder why all the girls swoon over him and all the boys envy him. Everyone wants to get close to him. Girls will give him anything and will do anything just for him. But what happens when a massacre occurs at South High? Suddenly, one by one, every single girl who has ever dated Taecyeon is being targeted and killed.

Will the killer be found and be brought to justice?...or will the killings continue until no one is left? 
A personal message to your reviewer?Anything else?
This was my first attempt writing a mystery story. I got good feedback from time to time from my subscribers. But I guess an actual review wouldn't hurt. I hope you enjoy reading it ^^ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eg5FnExOMOY 



tipkai 2:
`basics


AuthorCo-Author:
Onewluhan  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you prefer to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/201674  tipkai 
`your story

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?Current Chapter Count:Is your story rated?What is the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?Who are the main characters of your story?Story Description:
Letters to Forget-Me-Not http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/382565/letters-to-forget-me-not-infinite-romance-sunggyu-you-exo-lay-yixing Complete 32 Nope. Romance  Yixing, OC, Sunggyu What happens when you receive a mysterious love letter, addressed to "Forget-Me-Not"?

A letter you later find out is from the famous celebrity Yixing?

Will you mail him back telling him that he's got the wrong address?

Or will you pretend that you are this girl that he's in love with? 

A lie, a letter, a love.
 



tipkai 3:
`basics


AuthorCo-Author:
SkyBluePlains  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you prefer to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/279992  tipkai 
`your story

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?Current Chapter Count:Is your story rated?What is the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?Who are the main characters of your story?Story Description:
Love: Cure and Curse http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/380415/love-cure-and-curse-angst-romance-exo-exom-kris-origianlcharacter Complete Yes, for violence. Romance, angst and action  Kris and Cho Ara (OC)  
`don't let this summer end.
Additional Information for your Reviewer/Personal Message  

Originally written for a contest but then it was cancelled. However, I still wanted some sort of feedback. The prompt was "Love is a cure but also a curse."

Anything else?  

School's Out; Summer's In

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2 Re: Review Requests on Wed Jun 19, 2013 1:35 am

wishful


Admin
-kaara 1:
The Basics


AuthorCo-Author:
Saraxox  
Author Profile LinkCo-Author Profile Link:Who would you like to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/38727 --- 
About Your Story...

Story Title:Story LinkComplete or Incomplete?
My Slavehttp://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/247855/my-slave-yaoi-exo-kray-sekai-baekyeol-kaihun-sudo Incomplete 
Current Chapter CountIs your story rated?Does your story include any of the following?How would you describe the genre of your story?
Yes - Yaoi
 
Romance / Drama 
Please include a brief description of your story.What characters are included in your story?
Kim Jongin, a normal eighteen-year-old with a normal middle-class life, suddenly gets his entire world turned upside down as his family gets murdered due to their debts. As the only one remaining, he is taken to the Oh Mansion to serve his family's murderer's son, Oh Sehun.  The main characters of my story are Sehun and Kai from EXO-K (:  
Anything else you'd like to add?  
Saranghae, Wishful Thoughts~!


English is also not my first language. But I want to improve, so please be honest!



-kaara 2:
`basics


AuthorCo-Author:
leahsarahdelossantos  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you prefer to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/207223 -kaara 
`your story

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?Current Chapter Count:Is your story rated?What is the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?Who are the main characters of your story?Story Description:
What Makes a Rockstarhttp://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/406887IncompleteNope.romance- Yuri
 
Jessica Jung
Yuri Kwon 

A cold and indifferent girl on the outside but a sweet avid fangirl in the inside. Jung Jessica considers herself the number one fan of Korea’s Most Popular Rock Band “Cliché”. Not that she’ll admit it to anybody though. For someone known as their school’s Ice Princess, she can’t afford to lose her one and only definition.

Kwon Yuri has lost inspiration. Tired of the ruckus of the life in front of the camera and pressure behind it, he’s thinking of leaving the rock star life for good. Now torn by his contract and desire to leave, will he manage to write that one last song and leave it all behind?

Driven together by a peculiar event, what happens when the Korea's Rock Prince meets Ice Princess? 
`don't let this summer end.
Additional Information for your Reviewer/Personal Message  

It is a genderbender. Take your time and feel free to give constructive criticisms :)Enjoy reading and Goodluck

Anything else?  

School's Out; Summer's In



-kaara 3:
`basics


AuthorCo-Author:
priyuna  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you prefer to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/41309 -kaara 
`your story

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?Current Chapter Count:Is your story rated?What is the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?Who are the main characters of your story?Story Description:
Ghost In the Shadowhttp://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/454717Complete 10 Yes, for violence.angst, romance Luhan (exo), Tiffany (snsd) A man, desperately running away from his smothering fate.
A woman, gradually picking up the missing pieces of her past.
Does staying alive in the shadow counts as living? 
`don't let this summer end.
Additional Information for your Reviewer/Personal Message  

I hope you will accept my request. I don't mind honest and blunt reviews so don't worry if you feel the need to be harsh. Thank you c:

Anything else?  

School's Out; Summer's In.



kittyxluvlee 1:
`basics


AuthorCo-Author:
kittyfinkies  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you prefer to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/244257 kittyxluvlee 
`your story

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?Current Chapter Count:Is your story rated?What is the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?Who are the main characters of your story?Story Description:
The Virtual World http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/446061/the-virtual-world-friendship-kpop-romance-exo-virtual IncompleteNope.Comedy, Exo & Rin (OC)
 
Playing a game for you life, isn't that ridiculous? 
It is, because Rin is playing a game with her life on stake. Will she survive the virtual game she accidentally entered for fun? She will, because she'll be going through a fun adventure with  twelve handsome men. As long as you have fun together, nothing will be able to stop you. Not even death. That's what a game is isn't it?  
`don't let this summer end.
Additional Information for your Reviewer/Personal Message  

Character; I said that the main characters are Exo, but the whole exo has yet to appear in the fic xD. Also, English isn't my first language so yeah eue

Anything else?  

School's Out; Summer's In.



kittyxluvlee 2:
`basics


AuthorCo-Author:
anneistee  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you prefer to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/5378 kittyxluvlee 
`your story

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?Current Chapter Count:Is your story rated?What is the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?Who are the main characters of your story?Story Description:
Danger Zone http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/375855Complete Nope.slice-of-life  Simon of DMTN and OC Life is but an endless cycle.

Some people fall in love while the others fall out of it.

Miran knows that she's heading straight into an accident zone which might involve more people than herself; but she turns a blind eye to it anyways. 
`don't let this summer end.
Additional Information for your Reviewer/Personal Message  

i don't mind a brutally honest review. it's okay if i get low score. i know this fanfic might not be about your favorite kpop celebrities, so i hope you can accept my request. thank you Smile

Anything else?  

School's Out; Summer's In.



scarecrowscreams 1:
The Basics


Author:Co-Author:
missaleyh  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you like to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/71253 Whoever's Free! 
About Your Story...

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?
My One and Only http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/247475/my-one-and-only-romance-bap-shortstory-daehyun Incomplete
Current chapter count?Is your story rated?How would you describe the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?
No romance  
What characters are included in your story?Story Description:
Daehyun, OC and BAP It had always been her. Park Eunji had always been the one for Daehyun. 


Ever since he found her crying alone in the rain when she was three and had brought her to the orphanage where he was staying. 

After that, they grew up together and did everything together. They were inseparable. To others, they looked like a match made in heaven. 

But Eunji has no idea of Daehyun's undying love for her. She was oblivious to his feelings. She had always thought of him as an older brother that she never had. 

And Daehyun has yet to change that and tell her about his feelings.  



scarecrowscreams 2:
`basics


AuthorCo-Author:
Cutie-Pie  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you prefer to complete your request?
https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/185548 scarecrowscreams
`your story

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?Current Chapter Count:Is your story rated?What is the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?Who are the main characters of your story?Story Description:
[spooks]https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/386723/spooks-action-angst-yongguk-himchan-bap IncompleteYes, for a combination of more than one of the above. action, angst, bromance more that actual yaoi.  - Yaoi
 
B.A.P, mainly focused on Yongguk and Himchan.It's a mess. Running thru the dark, but still crowded streets, Yongguk tries to remember how did he end up here, while fighting for the sharp cold air. Avoiding people so he wont bump into them, into his sight flies tall, dark figure.Yongguk stops momentarily, as his mind went blank.

He's screwed.  
`don't let this summer end.
Additional Information for your Reviewer/Personal Message  

okay, this is my first attempt at writing someone move faster than a snail. ._. I really like action movies and books and I want to get out from cheesy, lovey-dovey stories that I used to write. I want to know if anything I write has at least a bit of sense or I should quit the idea of writing action and continue improving my romance writing skills. x_x Anyway, I wish you'll have fun reading my story - that's what I wanted to tell in all this rambling ^^'

Anything else?  

School's Out; Summer's In



scarecrowscreams 3:
`basics


AuthorCo-Author:
anneistee  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you prefer to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/5378 scarecrowscreams
`your story

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?Current Chapter Count:Is your story rated?What is the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?Who are the main characters of your story?Story Description:
Scandinavian Room http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/391500Complete Nope.slice-of-life, romance Jia and Fei of Miss A Jia and Fei were two bestfriends who had totally different experience in love and relationship. As Fei recovered from her battered marriage, Jia was heading downhill with her own relationship. The girls (and guys) might want to learn that the first rule in love is to keep their 'walls white'. 
`don't let this summer end.
Additional Information for your Reviewer/Personal Message  

i don't mind a brutally honest review. it's okay if i get low score. i know this fanfic might not be about your favorite kpop celebrities, so i hope you can accept my request. thank you Smile

Anything else?  

School's Out; Summer's In.



YGFamily97:
The Basics


Author:Co-Author:
SouthWest  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you like to complete your request?Are you willing to have someone else complete your request if it means that it will be done faster?What kind of review would you prefer?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/7251 --- Yes Harsh, Highly Analytical
About Your Story...

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?
The Academyhttp://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/224487/the-academy-bigbang-fantasticbaby Complete 
Current chapter count?Is your story rated?How would you describe the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?
12 No Action, Fantasy?, Science-Fiction?  
What characters are included in your story?Story Description:
Big Bang & OCs V.I., D-Lite, and T.O.P are the newest trainees at The Academy; an institution designed to train soldiers for the impending war.  They train both body and mind while the scientists track their progress and wait for their ability to appear.  This life is all the trainees know.  They remember nothing before waking up in the lab; and no one until V.I. has ever questioned it.

V.I., D-Lite, and T.O.P have a connection; something that draws them together and sets them apart from their follow trainees.  They search for answers, translate visions, and dodge bullies, but they end up only with more questions.  Then they meet Sol who introduces them to G.D, a fellow trainee who knows more about them and about The Academy then he is willing to tell.  But he holds the secret to their pasts and the key to escaping the prison they didn’t even know they were trapped in.   
A personal message to your reviewer?Anything else?
Okay, so this story isn't really complete, but I have labeled it as such because I have reached an ending point and I would like to get it reviewed before I begin the second part.  

English is my first language.  I'm not so concerned with a score.  I am requesting a review because I would like some constructive criticism about the story and about my writing.  I'm looking to improve both so I welcome any and all suggestions!

Thank you! 
Santa U Are the One by SMTown 

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3 Re: Review Requests on Wed Jun 19, 2013 1:36 am

wishful


Admin
Unclaimed D::
`basics


AuthorCo-Author:
Stephiee  
Author Profile Link:Co-Author Profile Link:Who would you prefer to complete your request?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/400005 contradictori
`your story

Story Title:Story Link:Complete or Incomplete?Current Chapter Count:Is your story rated?What is the genre of your story?Does your story include any of the following?Who are the main characters of your story?Story Description:
The Mansionhttp://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/463014Incomplete10 Nope.Horror, Crack, Mystery, Yaoi and Romance- Yaoi
 
All of EXO! On 1905, There was once a couple that owned a mansion.
They were happy and always does PDA. Until one day, when the couple were sleeping,
the maid set the house on fire and ran away.
After that, They said that the maid committed suicide because she felt guilty for killing the couple.
Then.. After many, many years, A korean boy band called EXO, entered the mansion because of a dare. Will they survive? or will they die? Find out more my reading the story! 
`don't let this summer end.
Additional Information for your Reviewer/Personal Message  

HAI! I'm really sorry if i have many mistakes. It's because English isn't my first language, I'm really sorry! T^T

Anything else?  

School's Out; Summer's In

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4 Re: Review Requests on Mon Jul 15, 2013 1:17 pm

oh...my....god....OTL I just realized you have to click on the things to see the request. /bricked. I shall have to start my other request now...OTL

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